September 22, 2012
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Colors of you.
This world is more colorful when you are around. The sun is brighter without blinding. The people seem kinder. The burden that weights in on my shoulder feels lighter. Each step I take feels quicker. Each mouthful of food I consume tastes sweeter. Each decision I make feels right. And each hug feels like the whole world is smiling upon me.
The world is of rainbow color when you smile. The few sparks of silver strands of hair illuminate the golden many. The wrinkled gaze reflects the clear blueness of the sky. The curviness of the thin lips blushes a pink kiss. And the perfect teeth cheerfully warms the heart like the milky white of marshmallows.
I longed for you. Never wanting to let go. All the blues and greys turned into lime greens and violets when you are near. Each morning feels like tasting pillow-soft rainbow donuts with a touch of maple syrup. That power you have. I crave, endlessly.
Comments (12)
In love?
sounds someone in love
So cute and syrupy! (Like how I did that?)
Awwww, I miss you too!
LOL
What a super positive and lovely read. Thanks ! I really needed this, especially after typing a whole blog on another blog that I read that was just pure garbage ! Anyone who feels that way about people in their loves truly loves them, and if those people know that, they really will feel super special. We all should be able to express ourselves in such a wonderful way at times. Take care and have an awesome start to the week, bye for now.
Kyle
Colors, or colours?
I love it Rudi. What a lovely composition for the donuts and for a secret love.
Thank you for that special book you are reading now. I am elated.
Hmm.... ^ ^
Well said.
=)
Is someone besotted?
@kyle061685 - @Vitamin_D - @Fatcat723 - @Wangium - it's complicated, actually. no possibility of permanent relationship in the horizon, so one can only say those things to one self to avoid embarrassment.
@brooklyn2028 - haha... i can always rely on you to make it seem syrupy
@CareyGLY - hahaha... carey, you're right! i AM missing you ;p
@secade - tomatoes, tomatos... ehhh (shrugs)
@ZSA_MD - thank you for the rec, zakiah. fyi, all of my poor attempts in posting something that is close to sound like a poetry, were done out of inspiration from reading your many beautiful poems posted here on xanga. i know that i have a long way to go, but i can't help but to be inspired. i thought you deserved to know
@ElusiveWords - thank you for the smile, matt
hope you had a good weekend.
@rudyhou - Oh My God! That is the best compliment I have ever received I think. Thank you. From the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU.
@ZSA_MD - u very welcome