February 14, 2013
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YOU
You came. I stumbled.
You left. I was perplexed.
You reappeared. I smiled.
You offered your hand. I took it.
You opened up your arms. I fell into them.
You said you miss me. I crumbled into pieces.
One by one, you take down the icy bricks of a wall that surrounds me.
Little by little, I feel worthy of you.
You asked of a future. I was stunned and speechless.
I made no promises, for I fear the possibility and the unknown.
But this much I know… I strive to be a better man because of YOU.
Comments (12)
I loved this.
This says a lot about you and the person that came into your life. Really honest and open and I just want to say congratulations! Beautiful
Love is in the air!
Love is in the air ... dadadum.
Beautiful!!!
Very nice!
Someone's in love
Happy Valentine's day! I bet the YOU's heart is melted reading this.
I LOVE IT Rudy. Each word has its own life it seems. So glad you are in love my friend. Happy Valentine's Day to you.
What a great poem for Valentine's Day, it's simple yet very powerful and carries great meaning and importance. I don't think I knew that you did poetry..... very cool ! Take care and have a fantastic weekend, bye for now.
Kyle
Ooh....how touchy! I think these should work well in Chinese phrases too!
@ElusiveWords - thanks matt n also for the rec
@stepaside_loser - thank you andrew n also for the rec
@andreas_d - ...everywhere i look around... da dum da dum
thanks for the rec, andreas.
@beowulf222 - ...every sight and every sound... da dum da dum ;p
@Fatcat723 - thanks robert
@stevew918 - thanks steve
@oxyGENE_08 - well... errr... no comment ;p
@Jitiam - better be! lol.
@ZSA_MD - thank you zakiah. it means a lot coming from you. happy valentine to you too. thanks also for the rec. hugs
@kyle061685 - thanks kyle. poetry? i don't. it's a poor attempt to commemorate the day's meaning by sharing a little bit of what i'm going through. but any success or inkling to do anything remotely close to a poetry would be largely influenced by the wonderful @ZSA_MD.
@CurryPuffy - seriously?? do share, gary. please!