Fluffy pillows Soft sheets Warm skin Wet kisses I long for you To take me down Put me back to one piece Whole and complete Lips to heart Touch to soul Craving you I do
That is an incredibly phenomenal poem. Right from the heart. LOVE IT. You take the cake in writing the emotions down.
beautiful, beautiful - expresses my feelings too
This is lovely. You speak so much with so little
I wonder what inspired this.
Very lovely poem.... simple and straight from the heart. You really captured well certain emotions and the desire of one to be with that really special someone. Sometimes people try and go all complicated with their words and descriptions, but simplicity is all that is needed... very well written.
Tim Hortons is like the most famous place to go in Canada. They have lots of locations in the US, though only in the east, and now they actually have locations in some countries in Asia such as UAE and Qatar. It's basically a place well known for their coffee and donuts, though they serve sandwhiches, bagels, muffins, soups, wraps, and a few other things as well. It would be nice to see them open up in Mexico one day !
Take care and have a fantastic weekend, bye for now.
@kyle061685 - thanks, kyle. i tried my best to be true without sharing too much. by the way, i've heard of tim hortons when i used to live in the states. just never been to one. i think i would like that place, just for the bagels
@christao408 - you are? oh no, have i gone overboard with my posting?
I loooooove it!!!
@rudyhou - You just toyed with my imagination more mister! lol
Not being split apart? XD
@Kliente2 - thank you n also for stopping by and leaving a comment.
@oxyGENE_08 - haha.. gene, i'm glad to be at your service. may my many more posts be just as tantalizing ;p
@Wangium - haha.. jason, that's for a DIFFERENT type of blogging ;p
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Me too. 😘
RUDY!
That is an incredibly phenomenal poem. Right from the heart. LOVE IT. You take the cake in writing the emotions down.
beautiful, beautiful - expresses my feelings too
This is lovely. You speak so much with so little
I wonder what inspired this.
Very lovely poem.... simple and straight from the heart. You really captured well certain emotions and the desire of one to be with that really special someone. Sometimes people try and go all complicated with their words and descriptions, but simplicity is all that is needed... very well written.
Tim Hortons is like the most famous place to go in Canada. They have lots of locations in the US, though only in the east, and now they actually have locations in some countries in Asia such as UAE and Qatar. It's basically a place well known for their coffee and donuts, though they serve sandwhiches, bagels, muffins, soups, wraps, and a few other things as well. It would be nice to see them open up in Mexico one day !
Take care and have a fantastic weekend, bye for now.
Kyle
Do tell!
Oh, my... i'm feeling a bit flushed. =P
@Jitiam - good to know ;p
@ZSA_MD - thanks you, zakiah. it means a lot coming from you. you inspire me to be poetic. thanks also for the rec.
@Fatcat723 - glad you like it, robert.
@Max_Taurean - thank you, max. thanks for visiting and leaving a comment. much appreciated.
@oxyGENE_08 - @CareyGLY - hehehe... sorry guys, i don't kiss n tell ;P
@kyle061685 - thanks, kyle. i tried my best to be true without sharing too much. by the way, i've heard of tim hortons when i used to live in the states. just never been to one. i think i would like that place, just for the bagels
@christao408 - you are? oh no, have i gone overboard with my posting?
I loooooove it!!!
@rudyhou - You just toyed with my imagination more mister! lol
Not being split apart? XD
@Kliente2 - thank you
n also for stopping by and leaving a comment.
@oxyGENE_08 - haha.. gene, i'm glad to be at your service. may my many more posts be just as tantalizing ;p
@Wangium - haha.. jason, that's for a DIFFERENT type of blogging ;p
@rudyhou - your blog's going 'erotica'? lol
@oxyGENE_08 - lol. far from it. but to tease once in a while is always fun ;p